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quinconcinnity ([personal profile] quinconcinnity) wrote in [community profile] kurofai 2012-04-24 04:39 pm (UTC)

*crawls out of woodwork* Where are all the voters? You and Cloverfield have both turned out amazing fics! I love this kind of story, with gods and dragons and a lyrical, mythological feeling throughout.
I liked the way you used the wind here. I knew as soon as Kurogane felt the wind in the cellar that Fai was a wind god, and I suspected later that he'd been sealed to ground the dragons, but I love that the actual reason for his imprisonment was to spare him pain until Kurogane could save him.
Kurogane and Fai were very much in character.
I loved the way Sakura and Tomoyo switched, and this version of Ashura.

1. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? (1-10)

10

2. How In-Character was this fic? (1-10)

9

3. How much did I enjoy this fic overall? (1-10)

9

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