What a neat world! It took me a while to realize that Yuuko is a mechanical dragon, but I adore her. Cursing, badass powerful dragon Yuuko, yes please! Also, I like how President Rondart isn't really a bad guy; just some person who is stuck in the shadows of his late father. That was an interesting way to hold him hostage...
1. How in-character was this fic? Fai (and Yuui's) are top notch IC. Kurogane I can see, but I'd like to know more of his background as a former garbage collector. Their interactions are adorable; but I'd also would have like to know a bit more of their past - how they hit it off, etc.
2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? Dragons? (Mechanical ones! :D) Check. Dangerous territories with muties and cross-breeds seen as monsters? Check! The twist on the cross-breeds was excellent.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? It was fun to read! Your world building and setting makes me jelly in green. Again, nice plot twist of Fai and Yuui's true conditions.
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1. How in-character was this fic?
Fai (and Yuui's) are top notch IC. Kurogane I can see, but I'd like to know more of his background as a former garbage collector. Their interactions are adorable; but I'd also would have like to know a bit more of their past - how they hit it off, etc.
2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt?
Dragons? (Mechanical ones! :D) Check. Dangerous territories with muties and cross-breeds seen as monsters? Check! The twist on the cross-breeds was excellent.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall?
It was fun to read! Your world building and setting makes me jelly in green. Again, nice plot twist of Fai and Yuui's true conditions.
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