"We want cookies, was written on a ripped-out page from a statute book. And Tea. It's not a proper hostage tea party without cookies and tea. Sincerely, F" ----> Hilarious!
1. How in-character was this fic? (8) I liked everyone, the interactions were great but Kuro-sama was a bit off in my opinion. I can't really explain why... I felt him helpless during the 'attack', not his usual self somehow.
2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? (9) Mechanical dragons? Absolutely YES! Well the social status (muties and crossbreeds)what you laid before us took of the edge of the actual dragon rider thing, but the main quest depended on dragons, so I guess it's okay.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (8) You could explain the characters' back-stories a bit further and the world you created. Your plot is great and it could be more angsty and deep, it really has a great potential in it.
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It's not a proper hostage tea party without cookies and tea.
Sincerely,
F" ----> Hilarious!
1. How in-character was this fic? (8)
I liked everyone, the interactions were great but Kuro-sama was a bit off in my opinion. I can't really explain why... I felt him helpless during the 'attack', not his usual self somehow.
2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? (9)
Mechanical dragons? Absolutely YES! Well the social status (muties and crossbreeds)what you laid before us took of the edge of the actual dragon rider thing, but the main quest depended on dragons, so I guess it's okay.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (8)
You could explain the characters' back-stories a bit further and the world you created. Your plot is great and it could be more angsty and deep, it really has a great potential in it.