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erm... *cougs politely* let's ignore that bit of flailing there.
1. How in-character was this fic? 10 This couldn't have been more IC, it was awesome, perfectly canon. Fai, so troubled, finding out he just can't live without Kurogane anymore, terribly worried about him, trying to protect him, willing to sacrifice himself. But Kurogane was also really protective over Fai, it's so good to see them warming up to each other, and fighting back-to-back. And there was Mokona! Dear Mokona, how I missed her! She's such a brave little thing, I loved how you just didn't make her comic relief or something like that, she was useful, she was fighing right there with the others. Many people forget that Mokona is also part of the family, but you nailed it.
2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? 10 Perfectly! I loved the story, it was so sad. It all made so much sense, using Fai's wish together with the machine's wish like that. It was all beautifullly written and very well-thought, everything made perfect sense!
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 10 If my flailing over there didn't hint to my enjoyment, I don't know what else will. I was hooked to the fic the moment I started reading it. It was beautiful, and it gave me so many feelings. Every detail, every interaction, it was great! Lots of KuroFai feelings, lots o Fai feelings, a great world, I loved it!
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erm... *cougs politely* let's ignore that bit of flailing there.
1. How in-character was this fic? 10
This couldn't have been more IC, it was awesome, perfectly canon. Fai, so troubled, finding out he just can't live without Kurogane anymore, terribly worried about him, trying to protect him, willing to sacrifice himself. But Kurogane was also really protective over Fai, it's so good to see them warming up to each other, and fighting back-to-back. And there was Mokona! Dear Mokona, how I missed her! She's such a brave little thing, I loved how you just didn't make her comic relief or something like that, she was useful, she was fighing right there with the others. Many people forget that Mokona is also part of the family, but you nailed it.
2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? 10
Perfectly! I loved the story, it was so sad. It all made so much sense, using Fai's wish together with the machine's wish like that. It was all beautifullly written and very well-thought, everything made perfect sense!
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 10
If my flailing over there didn't hint to my enjoyment, I don't know what else will. I was hooked to the fic the moment I started reading it. It was beautiful, and it gave me so many feelings. Every detail, every interaction, it was great! Lots of KuroFai feelings, lots o Fai feelings, a great world, I loved it!