1. How in-character was this fic? (1-10) 8 Kurogane as Thor and, Fai and Yuui as Loki was a really interesting idea. Kurogane taking things head on, and Fai being a sneaky trickster- perfect! And I like the different ways you portrayed Fai and Yuui.
2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? (1-10) 9 From the brief research I just did on the concept of "ghost in the machine" on wikipedia (having not been familiar with it before) it seems you interpreted it spot on. The idea that the two shared the same body, but can never see each other is really fascinating and tragic. Since people always say twins are almost like one person with 2 bodies, this is kind of the reverse, and the twins always seemed like that from what we see of them in Tsubasa.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (1-10) 9 I couldn't stop reading it. I love the way you write- your dialogue and your descriptions. I also liked the nice balance of action and intrigue. And the general premise was really good too.
(And as a side note, this is my first time posting in the community, so if anyone's wondering who the hell this person is, I'm Naomi. It's nice to meet you all :) )
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1. How in-character was this fic? (1-10)
8
Kurogane as Thor and, Fai and Yuui as Loki was a really interesting idea.
Kurogane taking things head on, and Fai being a sneaky trickster- perfect! And I like the different ways you portrayed Fai and Yuui.
2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? (1-10)
9
From the brief research I just did on the concept of "ghost in the machine" on wikipedia (having not been familiar with it before) it seems you interpreted it spot on. The idea that the two shared the same body, but can never see each other is really fascinating and tragic. Since people always say twins are almost like one person with 2 bodies, this is kind of the reverse, and the twins always seemed like that from what we see of them in Tsubasa.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (1-10)
9 I couldn't stop reading it. I love the way you write- your dialogue and your descriptions. I also liked the nice balance of action and intrigue. And the general premise was really good too.
(And as a side note, this is my first time posting in the community, so if anyone's wondering who the hell this person is, I'm Naomi. It's nice to meet you all :) )