As much as I tried to make Kurogane and Yuui's totally requited angsty love story the center of this fic, I think the twins pretty much stole the spotlight. ;-; But I'm def glad you thought each of the twins came through strongly as their own person and own personality, rather than just being doubles of each other (or aspects of the same person, which is what they really are.)
I am forever an optimist, so I totally believe that Fai-tree will grow tall and strong and someday, I dunno, drop a giant peach on someone's head and baby Fai will be in there. Could totally happen!
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totally requitedangsty love story the center of this fic, I think the twins pretty much stole the spotlight. ;-; But I'm def glad you thought each of the twins came through strongly as their own person and own personality, rather than just being doubles of each other (or aspects of the same person, which is what they really are.)I am forever an optimist, so I totally believe that Fai-tree will grow tall and strong and someday, I dunno, drop a giant peach on someone's head and baby Fai will be in there. Could totally happen!