I felt a bit stupid because there were aspects of the science part that I did understand and others I didn't although I'm a scentist. XD (I'm not used to think in particles.)
The concept of the story was really cool and I can only imagine how hard it must've been to organize it so that everything fits together. The reader can feel the characters frustration over picking the wrong door. The effect of using the teleport were well done and reminded me of the time-skipping episode of LOST, so I was really concerned about the characters. The only thing that really bugged me was Kurogane calling Fai by his name. He usually doesn't do that. Aside from that, wonderful fic~
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I felt a bit stupid because there were aspects of the science part that I did understand and others I didn't although I'm a scentist. XD (I'm not used to think in particles.)
The concept of the story was really cool and I can only imagine how hard it must've been to organize it so that everything fits together. The reader can feel the characters frustration over picking the wrong door. The effect of using the teleport were well done and reminded me of the time-skipping episode of LOST, so I was really concerned about the characters.
The only thing that really bugged me was Kurogane calling Fai by his name. He usually doesn't do that. Aside from that, wonderful fic~