Talk about taking 'just desserts' to a whole literal level...
1. How in-character was this fic? I think it'd be very Fai to feel frustrated that he cannot read a language that Kurogane and Syaoran could. (I would be too, personally!) Poor Fai; he really just wanted to make something nice and thoughtful for his partner. But I think Kurogane's reaction was a little bit off. Yes, he would feel pain (which you showed), but I think him chasing Fai because he's hurt and upset seems uncharacteristic given how closer they got in the end of the series.
2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? Unintentional vengeance indeed. I like the magical books, but I feel that there could have been some more fantasy elements.
3. It is a (disturbingly) cute idea. I wouldn't know how I'd handle with that type of ice cream O.O The story is short for me to grasp a better sense of their relationships and the overall prompt; but I totally understand. After all, I did two stories last year as an understudy, and it isn't easy to devote equal attention and energy to more than one stories in a time frame for the Olympics. Be sure to work on your tenses, as well as be cautious about incomplete sentences.
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Avg: A solid 7!
Can't say it enough, but you're a super duper trooper for sharing two fics in a big event! *passes trophy from last year to animangod*
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1. How in-character was this fic?
I think it'd be very Fai to feel frustrated that he cannot read a language that Kurogane and Syaoran could. (I would be too, personally!) Poor Fai; he really just wanted to make something nice and thoughtful for his partner. But I think Kurogane's reaction was a little bit off. Yes, he would feel pain (which you showed), but I think him chasing Fai because he's hurt and upset seems uncharacteristic given how closer they got in the end of the series.
2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt?
Unintentional vengeance indeed. I like the magical books, but I feel that there could have been some more fantasy elements.
3. It is a (disturbingly) cute idea. I wouldn't know how I'd handle with that type of ice cream O.O The story is short for me to grasp a better sense of their relationships and the overall prompt; but I totally understand. After all, I did two stories last year as an understudy, and it isn't easy to devote equal attention and energy to more than one stories in a time frame for the Olympics. Be sure to work on your tenses, as well as be cautious about incomplete sentences.
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Avg: A solid 7!
Can't say it enough, but you're a super duper trooper for sharing two fics in a big event! *passes trophy from last year to animangod*