My first guess was that it was "dog icecream." I guess that would have just been tasteless not a horrible revenge.
1. How in-character was this fic? 7/10
For being a comedy fic, you didn't over-exaggerate Kurogane's anger. It was more believable and more funny. I can imagine it actually happening, which it did.
2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? 6/10
Another creative prompt idea. I only wish the icecream itself was something magical and mischievous (Canary Creme?), then it might have fitted with the fantasy prompt better.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 6/10
Short and sweet even if the icecream wasn't. I wondered what it would have tasted like? I imagine that with more time (being the pinch-hitter must be stressful >.<), there could have been more detail in the beginning, which just sped by too quickly. I am glad that Fai did get a taste of his own medicine though. \o/
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1. How in-character was this fic? 7/10
For being a comedy fic, you didn't over-exaggerate Kurogane's anger. It was more believable and more funny. I can imagine it actually happening, which it did.
2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? 6/10
Another creative prompt idea. I only wish the icecream itself was something magical and mischievous (Canary Creme?), then it might have fitted with the fantasy prompt better.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 6/10
Short and sweet even if the icecream wasn't. I wondered what it would have tasted like? I imagine that with more time (being the pinch-hitter must be stressful >.<), there could have been more detail in the beginning, which just sped by too quickly. I am glad that Fai did get a taste of his own medicine though. \o/
Thank you for the fic and participation.