1. How funny was this fic? 10 2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 10 3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 10
I had to pause for a good 5 minutes to just LAUGH because MOKONA IN THE BAR OHMYGOD SECOND BEST THING EVER--second only next to Kurogane wanking in Fai's body. I just KNEW Fai could hear him somehow and I was dying of secondhand embarrassment for when Fai eventually made himself known. Still. So hot.
I have to admit. For the entire first half of the fic I was anticipating when Kurogane eventually used Fai's magic, because of howbyou set this on their feather hunting journey instead of after (No Sakura but less possible angst, more ideal for comedy and all the possible kurofai fluffsmut). I had to keep reminding myself this was comedy and no Fai Angst (tm) will show up. By the second half I just lied back on my bed and laughed till I cried.
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2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 10
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 10
I had to pause for a good 5 minutes to just LAUGH because MOKONA IN THE BAR OHMYGOD SECOND BEST THING EVER--second only next to Kurogane wanking in Fai's body. I just KNEW Fai could hear him somehow and I was dying of secondhand embarrassment for when Fai eventually made himself known. Still. So hot.
I have to admit. For the entire first half of the fic I was anticipating when Kurogane eventually used Fai's magic, because of howbyou set this on their feather hunting journey instead of after (No Sakura but less possible angst, more ideal for comedy and all the possible kurofai fluffsmut). I had to keep reminding myself this was comedy and no Fai Angst (tm) will show up. By the second half I just lied back on my bed and laughed till I cried.