OMG, YOU OUTDID YOURSELF WITH THIS ONE (and I had forgotten how much I MISSED your comedy fic, omg ♥) - I was laughing loud enough to wake the neighbors at various points of this fic and literally crying with laughter at least once. IT WAS BEAUTIFUL, THANK YOU FOR THIS *HUGS YOU TO PIECES*
I already shouted at you about this, earlier, but let me repeat myself - Mokona in Syaoran is the best thing EVER. THE BEST. THE POOR BOY. I couldn't stop laughing at Kurogane jerking off in Fai's body (STURDY STALLION OF SUWA), either, and Sakura in Kurogane's body, blushing and tying bows into her hair and WALKING INTO THINGS ALL THE TIME was plain PERFECT
One of my absolute favorite parts definitely was the bar scene, not only for the well-placed Oglaf reference ("... beating it to death with the half-charred remains of my penis!" I CAN'T), but also because of Mokona embarrassing Syaoran into oblivion.
"'Hiya!' Mokona greeted them all with a dazzling smile. 'Did you know, I have hair on my underarms, my legs, and on the soft wiggly things on my crotch, too. It looks like you guys have lots of hair on your bodies, too! Can I see?'
I was not going to quote because I would really have to quote the whole fic back at you, BUT THIS HAD ME IN TEARS, OMFG, YOU BEAUTIFUL PERSON ♥ You did say that Syaoran had gotten the worst deal of them all, but I hadn't realized HOW worse he was off until here. I think he will be very, very glad if he never has to meet anyone from this world, again.
The dragon slaying was absolutely perfect, as well - of COURSE Sakura would end up having a tea party with the monster, HOW ELSE COULD THIS HAVE PLAYED OUT. But I also loved the groups absolute confidence in Sakura going dragon slaying ("Interrupting a girl's first dragon slaying is a major faux pas") and the image of Syaoran waddling off to save her with the giant sword in his paws.
And the end to this, omg. Yue with his fake Olden English, Syaoran-in-Mokona trying to protect Sakura-in-Kurogane, Mokona the pacifist, Kurogane discovering waxed, surprisingly smooth skin on his body... I was dying and everything about this was GREAT.
This fic is an absolute gem and I LOVE IT. :DDD Have all my love *hands it over gooey bundle of love* ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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OMG, YOU OUTDID YOURSELF WITH THIS ONE (and I had forgotten how much I MISSED your comedy fic, omg ♥) - I was laughing loud enough to wake the neighbors at various points of this fic and literally crying with laughter at least once. IT WAS BEAUTIFUL, THANK YOU FOR THIS *HUGS YOU TO PIECES*
I already shouted at you about this, earlier, but let me repeat myself - Mokona in Syaoran is the best thing EVER. THE BEST. THE POOR BOY. I couldn't stop laughing at Kurogane jerking off in Fai's body (STURDY STALLION OF SUWA), either, and Sakura in Kurogane's body, blushing and tying bows into her hair and WALKING INTO THINGS ALL THE TIME was plain PERFECT
One of my absolute favorite parts definitely was the bar scene, not only for the well-placed Oglaf reference ("... beating it to death with the half-charred remains of my penis!" I CAN'T), but also because of Mokona embarrassing Syaoran into oblivion.
I was not going to quote because I would really have to quote the whole fic back at you, BUT THIS HAD ME IN TEARS, OMFG, YOU BEAUTIFUL PERSON ♥ You did say that Syaoran had gotten the worst deal of them all, but I hadn't realized HOW worse he was off until here. I think he will be very, very glad if he never has to meet anyone from this world, again.
The dragon slaying was absolutely perfect, as well - of COURSE Sakura would end up having a tea party with the monster, HOW ELSE COULD THIS HAVE PLAYED OUT. But I also loved the groups absolute confidence in Sakura going dragon slaying ("Interrupting a girl's first dragon slaying is a major faux pas") and the image of Syaoran waddling off to save her with the giant sword in his paws.
And the end to this, omg. Yue with his fake Olden English, Syaoran-in-Mokona trying to protect Sakura-in-Kurogane, Mokona the pacifist, Kurogane discovering waxed, surprisingly smooth skin on his body... I was dying and everything about this was GREAT.
This fic is an absolute gem and I LOVE IT. :DDD Have all my love *hands it over gooey bundle of love* ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥