oh my goodness, I love that you did a comedic angel and demon team thing (ala Good Omens). Poor Kurogane and his too short robe and being exposed to just about everyone and Syaoran just being a hapless nerd, somewhat closeted pervert. I think Sakura was the best. Rebelling princess who thought she would endure all tough stuff when she got imprisoned but FWR is totally not that type of Satanist. Party Spells for Beginners and Kurogane being a TERRIBLE actor (well an angel in general) and Touya having none of his shit, these are a few of the silliest things I liked.

I really had fun reading this. Thank you! :DD