OMG! At first I thought this was going to be a chobits-like setting, and then it got better! XD It was really fun reading it. Love how you managed to get Mokona looking like Mokona into the story. And Doumeki protecting Subaru from Seishiro! <3 The only thing I didn't like were some of the scene transitions. Sometimes I thought I had skipped a paragraph by mistake.

1. How in-character was this fic? 9
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 9
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 9