1. How in-character was this fic? (1-10) 10 2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (1-10) 8 handled it fairly well, though I wish it had been more detailed. Like us seeing them in action and not just spoken about. 3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (1-10) 8.5
I really, really enjoy this concept, but I was a little confused and this felt kind of rushed. You establish an interesting world that seemed fairly dark. I wasn't sure if the universe was suffering from a heat death scenario or was their an encroaching darkness? I'm curious about the blight. Did it take a human form or possess people? I feel like kurogane found everyone a little too quickly and we didn't get much of a time frame or details ( I don't remember the ship having a shield on it mentioned before the ending)
This fic could have easily become a monster in size. Especially when you were going for Treasure Planet/Atlantis vibes, which I adore. I got the tp from the solar ships and pirates and Atlantis from the idea of deities living and actively protecting their people, but it could've been delved into so much deeper and would LOVE to see this idea extended. Ships sailing on solar winds, wild planets covered in ruins, a primitive looking, but superior technological race all while trying to restore the sun to keep life going and the moon to keep things in balance.
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2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (1-10) 8 handled it fairly well, though I wish it had been more detailed. Like us seeing them in action and not just spoken about.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (1-10) 8.5
I really, really enjoy this concept, but I was a little confused and this felt kind of rushed. You establish an interesting world that seemed fairly dark. I wasn't sure if the universe was suffering from a heat death scenario or was their an encroaching darkness? I'm curious about the blight. Did it take a human form or possess people? I feel like kurogane found everyone a little too quickly and we didn't get much of a time frame or details ( I don't remember the ship having a shield on it mentioned before the ending)
This fic could have easily become a monster in size. Especially when you were going for Treasure Planet/Atlantis vibes, which I adore. I got the tp from the solar ships and pirates and Atlantis from the idea of deities living and actively protecting their people, but it could've been delved into so much deeper and would LOVE to see this idea extended. Ships sailing on solar winds, wild planets covered in ruins, a primitive looking, but superior technological race all while trying to restore the sun to keep life going and the moon to keep things in balance.