8 - Bubbly Fai was a bit excessive at some times, but not too off for a more lighthearted interpretation, I suppose!
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt?
9 - Cool Stargate-y premise, you adhered well to the prompt, however, I didn't detect a lot of Team Dark going on in this one!
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall?
7.5 - The Greek and all the research were way cool! But the rapid scene changes without textual cues were very hard to follow, and there were punctuation and grammar issues that I personally found distracting and detracting. The plot was also hard to follow - I thought at first this was going to be about Fei Wang Reed's shady organization, then it seemed to be about Fai's struggles for scientific recognition, and then it was about time travel, and then a dangerous quest of which we only got highlights. I would have loved to see any single of those expanded upon and visited with more depth!
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8 - Bubbly Fai was a bit excessive at some times, but not too off for a more lighthearted interpretation, I suppose!
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt?
9 - Cool Stargate-y premise, you adhered well to the prompt, however, I didn't detect a lot of Team Dark going on in this one!
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall?
7.5 - The Greek and all the research were way cool! But the rapid scene changes without textual cues were very hard to follow, and there were punctuation and grammar issues that I personally found distracting and detracting. The plot was also hard to follow - I thought at first this was going to be about Fei Wang Reed's shady organization, then it seemed to be about Fai's struggles for scientific recognition, and then it was about time travel, and then a dangerous quest of which we only got highlights. I would have loved to see any single of those expanded upon and visited with more depth!
Thanks so much for writing us a fic this year~