2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (1-10) 8
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (1-10) 7
I think the premise and the way you weaved in the mythology bits was great!! But what greatly subtracted from being able to really get into the world and the story - because really I was in a low-level state of confusion for the most part while reading this - was that it felt like having too-brief glimpses of snippets of things to really get the whole picture. And in a way, it's as if it's missing a bit of soul? I feel like the concept, character motivations, and all the many, many fantastic thoughts packed behind this, didn't really come through as well as they could have!
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7
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (1-10)
8
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (1-10)
7
I think the premise and the way you weaved in the mythology bits was great!! But what greatly subtracted from being able to really get into the world and the story - because really I was in a low-level state of confusion for the most part while reading this - was that it felt like having too-brief glimpses of snippets of things to really get the whole picture. And in a way, it's as if it's missing a bit of soul? I feel like the concept, character motivations, and all the many, many fantastic thoughts packed behind this, didn't really come through as well as they could have!