We're still a little sparse on votes, so I hope it is okay with all the writers to have a moderator jumping in to vote as well!
1. How in-character was this fic? (10)
Honestly, I thought you did a fantastic job with the characters. They were poignant, honest, and lived in your world but never clashed with the characters I know and love. I thought the development of their relationship was very well-handled.
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (10)
I found it clever and deep and unexpected, a true fulfilment of the prompt.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (9)
This fic was a lovely surprise for me, and I thought that the slow pacing carried a lot of gravity - perfect for this fairy-tale-like story. It built this atmosphere of quiet grief and desperation, with that hazy feeling of a fairy world that doesn't want you to look at it too closely. The only thing I would have liked to see done differently would be to draw out the ending a little more; I couldn't put my finger on the reason it felt a little rushed.
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1. How in-character was this fic? (10)
Honestly, I thought you did a fantastic job with the characters. They were poignant, honest, and lived in your world but never clashed with the characters I know and love. I thought the development of their relationship was very well-handled.
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (10)
I found it clever and deep and unexpected, a true fulfilment of the prompt.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (9)
This fic was a lovely surprise for me, and I thought that the slow pacing carried a lot of gravity - perfect for this fairy-tale-like story. It built this atmosphere of quiet grief and desperation, with that hazy feeling of a fairy world that doesn't want you to look at it too closely. The only thing I would have liked to see done differently would be to draw out the ending a little more; I couldn't put my finger on the reason it felt a little rushed.