2. 8 I liked the twist but was a bit confused about some of it. Mainly when Fai was taken and Kurogane went there repeatedly and took stuff back.
3. 9 Interesting interpretation.
4. 8 There were some parts that were a bit confusing (mentioned above)and the pace seemed a bit rushed. Other than that I quite enjoyed the story. Very nice job!
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Nice job.
2. 8
I liked the twist but was a bit confused about some of it. Mainly when Fai was taken and Kurogane went there repeatedly and took stuff back.
3. 9
Interesting interpretation.
4. 8
There were some parts that were a bit confusing (mentioned above)and the pace seemed a bit rushed. Other than that I quite enjoyed the story. Very nice job!
5. Yes