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xfourleafcloverx ([personal profile] xfourleafcloverx) wrote in [community profile] kurofai2018-09-07 05:13 pm

[TEAM GODS] (TINGO) High Seas


Title: High Seas
Prompt: Tingo- to steal everything from your neighbors house by borrowing and not returning
Rating: M
Tags: alternate universe; romance; angst; mentions/hints of abuse; drowning; smut/sexual content; a bit of cursing; not suitable for newbies/Nick

Posted on AO3. Hope you all enjoy!

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1. How in-character was this fic? (1-10)
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (1-10)
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? (1-10)
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (1-10)
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Mirai

(Anonymous) 2018-09-18 12:54 am (UTC)(link)
1. 10
2. 10
3. 10
4. 10
5. Yes

Lo disfrute mucho. https://archiveofourown.org/users/Mirai737

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(Anonymous) 2018-09-23 03:16 am (UTC)(link)
8
10
10
8
yes

A cute story especially Fai's hoarding but Kurogane would sometimes get a little OOC. I liked how Fai became a god too.

Lemazayahaza@tumblr

Re: vote

(Anonymous) 2018-09-23 03:28 am (UTC)(link)
sorry i pressed enter too fast
these are my actual ratings
8
10
10
7
yes
lemazayahaza@tumblr
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[personal profile] miyakodea 2018-09-23 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
1. 9
Nice job.

2. 8
I liked the twist but was a bit confused about some of it. Mainly when Fai was taken and Kurogane went there repeatedly and took stuff back.

3. 9
Interesting interpretation.

4. 8
There were some parts that were a bit confusing (mentioned above)and the pace seemed a bit rushed. Other than that I quite enjoyed the story. Very nice job!

5. Yes
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[personal profile] flowerspeaks 2018-09-28 12:10 pm (UTC)(link)
1. 7
2. 7
3. 8
4. 8
yes

I felt like your characterizations were good but could have been more expanded upon as well as the prompt- I kind of felt like it was thrown in there as a detail and not really a prompt. I did think you nailed the teams theme and I did find the fic overall very enjoyable and fun. It was just a light heart fun fic- very nice.

[personal profile] travellinghobbit 2018-09-28 04:50 pm (UTC)(link)
1. 10
2. 10
3. 10
4. 10
5. Yes

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Edited (Added tumblr profile) 2018-09-28 20:54 (UTC)