[TEAM GODS] (Won) Des pas sur la neige

[yououui]

Title: Des pas sur la neige (Footprints in the Snow)
Prompt: Won - the reluctance on a person's part to let go of an illusion
Rating: Teen and Up
Tags: Alternate universe; Angst; Fluff; Romance; Many things relating to religion, demons, death, and the afterlife; Major character death; Safe for newbies
I stepped in as a pinch hitter for this prompt, so it is not as long as I typically like but hopefully that'll just make it easier for you to read. Enjoy!


https://archiveofourown.org/works/15947642

~the end.


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Comments

Beautiful Story

[miyakodea]

1. 8
Overall I think you did a really nice job. Kurogane seemed pretty on point. Fai and his counter were a bit more difficult to gauge since the focus was on Kurogane.

2. 10
Between the flashbacks and the past actually haunting him, you really hit the mark. The ending was also fitting.

3. 9
You did a great job of incorporating different aspects of your team's god theme. The shrine, the prayers, the magic, and the demon were all beautifully woven into the story.

4. 10
It was an amazing story that had a lot of meaning. The flashbacks were not intrusive, as they often are, and enhanced the story. I very much enjoyed all the subtle messages and the beautiful ending.

5. Yes (and I am glad I didn't read them before starting the story)

Overall, wonderful job. It was amazing what you were able to accomplish as a pinch-hitter.