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[Team Sea] (Coffee shop AU) Latte Macchiato and a Soldier's Back
Title: Latte Macchiato and a Soldier's Back
Prompt: Coffee shop AU
Rating: Mature
Tags: Non-Graphic Violence, Past Character Death, Prostitution
Summery:
If you had told him a year and a half ago if he would ever see himself working two jobs—busting his ass at a 9-5 as a pharmaceutical scientist—only to come to his second job where his manager was none other than his boyfriends kid sister?
Well Fai probably would have looked at you like you were possessed before running off to meet one of his swanky ex-clients.
His life has always been a bit of a complicated hot mess though—so what could he do?
The things you do for love, right?
(https://archiveofourown.org/works/20293084?view_full_work=true)
~the end.
Thank you for reading! How did I do?
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1. How in-character was this fic? (1-10)
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (1-10)
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? (1-10)
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (1-10)
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2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 8
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? 6 if this was from Kuroganes POV on the ship, etc or if the coffee shop was by the sea or Fai had some fascination with the ocean, etc it would have helped. I think it gets little lost a little with the trying to stay true to the prompt.
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 10
5. Was the my fic tagged correctly? Yes
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(Anonymous) 2019-08-19 09:05 am (UTC)(link)2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 8
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? 8
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 10
5. Was the my fic tagged correctly? Yes
I love this fic, it's so well written and emotions are described so vividly.
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(Anonymous) 2019-08-20 10:41 pm (UTC)(link)9
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Interesting take on the theme. I realize that Kurogane being in the navy was the theme but I really felt like it wasn't a central part of the story.
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2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 9
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? 7
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 7
5. Was the my fic tagged correctly? Yes
Good job! I really reeeeaaalllyyy liked the focus on Kurogane and Fai being best friends, and the amount of times Fai thought of Kurogane as his "only friend." It's kind of sad for Fai lol but most stories go straight to them being in love, so I always love it when there's a focus on their friendship as well. I guess my biggest note would be that, other than Kurogane being in the navy, it didn't have much to do with the sea. If I didn't know the prompts, I don't think I would have been able to guess that this was a coffee shop/sea AU.
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I liked the high level of detail there was, and now close Fai and Kurogane were before they had even met
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2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 10
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? 10
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 10
5. Was the my fic tagged correctly Yes
Wow, when I saw that it was a coffee shop AU, this was not what I was expecting! But boy did I enjoy it!! That was such a lovely read! Wonderful world building, so many details. I think you did a great job with the characterization and dialog! You also managed to keep it fairly light and humorous for some really heavy topics. Overall fantastic and so fun to read!Now I have the song Brandy stuck in my head!
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I liked this story a lot!
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4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (10)
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Oh beans. I really loved this fic! I wanted to read more of it. I did think the sea and coffee felt sort of tangential to the core of the fic, but it was so enjoyable and you did so well with your core concepts!!
I hope you leave a note here if you ever revisit or keep running with this AU--it's really enchanting.
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(Anonymous) 2019-09-27 08:37 pm (UTC)(link)2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 7
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? 7
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 8
5. Was the my fic tagged correctly Yes
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(Anonymous) 2019-09-29 03:21 am (UTC)(link).8. 7. 7. 9
Enjoyed it! Love the emphasized bountries. I did forget that it was coffee shop/sea themed since i was so invested in their relationship up and downs and flirts.