[Team Space] (Daemon) Dead and Gone

[xfourleafcloverx]

Title: Dead and Gone
Prompt: Daemon
Rating: Teen+
Tags: Violence, Character death, mentioned torture, not safe for newbie

Kurogane and Fai are some of the best mercenaries in the galaxy. However, they are a long part of a lost royalty. What are they planning to do and how do Sakura and Syaoran play into it all? Enjoy!

Dead and Gone

~the end.

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[xfourleafcloverx]

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[peaceful_fury]

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[xfourleafcloverx]

Thank you!

[yououui]

1. How in-character was this fic? 9
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 10
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? 10
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 8
5. Was the my fic tagged correctly? Yes

At first I was having a hard time deciding how "in-character" everything was, since Fai wasn't acting the way Fai normally does with Kurogane, so when the twist happened it all made sense lol. I really liked this one!

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[(Anonymous)]

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I commend you on such a long fic! Your idea for yui and finally fais daemons was cool. I was awfully confused with the romance between fai and yui since I was under the impression that the first part of the story happened while Kurogane was a child...until it was later clarified, lol

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[crystalrequiem]

1. How in-character was this fic? (9)
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (7)
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? (10)
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (8)
5. Was the my fic tagged correctly (Yes)

Perfectly spacey with a super fun core concept and interesting world-building! I like that you really went in and designed a whole alien species, and the idea about one-eyed twins as omens was really fresh.

I did think it didn't really fit the daemon prompt, but it was still a pretty fun space action adventure regardless!

I think I would have enjoyed it more if we got a little more focus on Yuui and Kurogane, but otherwise you really knocked it out of the park.

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[(Anonymous)]

1. How in-character was this fic? 7
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 10
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? 8
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 8
5. Was the my fic tagged correctly Yes


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[sciencemyfiction]

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I love this honestly; I especially like how different Kurogane's relationship is with Fai and Yui. Interesting take!