[Team Space] (Roommates) To Boldly Go

[tsubasafan]

Title: To Boldly Go
Prompt:Roommates
Rating: M
Tags:Building relationships, space, everyone teases Kurogane
Any author’s notes:
By the end I’m hoping the things Fai does makes a little more sense.


https://archiveofourown.org/works/20331727

~the end.


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[crystalrequiem]

Too cute!

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A really fun twist for the roommate trope!

You had Kurogane spot on--all his internal dialogue and everything down to his realization was perfect. Fai felt a little flat to me personally, but that's probably just a POV consequence. and like I said on AO3--definitely kept me guessing!

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[tsubasafan]

Thanks! Yes, I usually write Fai POV so it’s hard to not have his thoughts and stuff pressing in so it was strictly through Kuros eyes