[Team Sea] (Vampire/Werewolf) Sea Changes

[maquillage]

Title: Sea Changes
Prompt: Vampire/Werewolf
Rating: Teen
Tags: Alternate Universe (Modern with Magic), Vampire tropes, Werewolf tropes, Vampire-related self-inflicted injury, Fae & Faries, Implied/Referenced Suicide, Implied/Referenced Child Abuse, Drinking to Cope, Agoraphobia, Drowning Imagery, Unresolved Sexual Tension, Unresolved Romantic Tension, Not Safe for Nick/Newbies

A/N: I'm posting an unfinished fic for now and will take a point reduction for that, but the final chapter should be posted by this weekend at the latest! When it's up, I will edit this post to reflect that the fic is complete. This fic is now complete!!!

Summary: Kurogane's assignments are generally simple. As a Knight of the Moon Court and hired sword for the In-Between Witch of Dimensions, he eliminates renegade Folk who have grown corrupted by their lust for blood and power. But his latest assignment presents a new set of challenges: a mysterious power polluting the sea, a monstrous wolf on the waves, and a strange blonde man in a house on a hill, who offers Kurogane hospitality and lies in equal measure.

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[crystalrequiem]

You have slain me

1. How in-character was this fic? (10)
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (8)
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Oh my god this is so compact--every scene has purpose, nothing's wasted, and there's a sense of progression and pace here that really speaks to your incredible skill as a writer. Not to mention the fun themes and absolutely masterful way you weave Tsubasa cannon and characters into your own cool world.

I really hope you plan to play with this universe more--it's great!!!!

https://crystalrequiem.tumblr.com/

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[(Anonymous)]

1. 9
2. 10
3. 10
4. 9
5. Yes

About point 2: some might argue that since there are no actual werewolves or vampires in this fic, the prompt was not handled well enough. But I think the opposite is true: you managed to include both vampires and werewolves without actually including them, staying true to your team's theme. That is impressive and was handled really well, so I gave it a 10/10 :)

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[(Anonymous)]

First: Sorry I replied to a comment rather than make a new one. Oops 🙈
Second: I just read on the votings page that you're supposed to leave a social media account, but I don't have facebook, tumblr or any of those. Does reddit work?
https://old.reddit.com/user/KazeKilee/

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[(Anonymous)]

10
7.5
10
Yes

You know what makes a good story? Even if the reader predicts what will happen or how it will end, they still keep on reading cause the it is so damn good. This is how i feel about your wonderful fic! I just had a hardtime reconcilling wolves/vampires with sea monsters but still, a great read.

Lemazayahaza@tumblr

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[(Anonymous)]

Opps forgot a score

10
7.5
10
10
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Still lemazayahaza

[(Anonymous)]

1. How in-character was this fic? 9
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 9
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? 9
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 8
5. Was the my fic tagged correctly Yes


https://archiveofourown.org/users/Hestiana

[tsubasafan]

1. How in-character was this fic? (9)
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (10it took me a moment to realize the vampire part more than just Kuroganes family being killed by them. It came from mokona and Fai taking blood, it came from Ashura taking from Fai, and it came from Fai/Yuui taking from the land/ocean.
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? (10) the more I thought about it the more I thought it fit the theme fairly well. You took the association with the moon and the ocean and werewolves and made this. Really clever way to fulfill the theme.
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (8.5) it took me about a chapter to get into things, It was a little jarring being thrown into this world, but at the same time it was very streamlined.
5. Was the my fic tagged correctly (Yes)