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kurofai2019-08-22 09:05 pm
sciencemyfiction) wrote in kurofai2019-08-22 09:05 pm
[Team Space](Vampire/Werewolf) Mokona Star
Title: Mokona Star
Prompt:Vampire/Werewolf
Rating: Teen
Tags: Alternate Universe, NSFN(as in not safe for newbies), Canon-Typical Violence, Hurt/comfort, abuse (neglect), confronting the idea that people can be treated as expendable with a resounding 'no'
Author's note: (Update 8/28) Fic now complete! Thanks again for your patience.
Summary: Kurogane woke up in space, but it wasn’t the right space. Now he's caught up in a whirlwind of trouble with aliens the likes of which he'd never even contemplated, and what's worse, it seems like his lunar cycle is completely out of whack out here.
All he wants is to get home, but he's not sure that wish will ever come true.
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You already know how I feel, my friend. Great work! you pulled vampire and werewolf into some really cool new places and I loved every second of it.
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Ok, all I can say is I loved it, I loved it so much. The world building game is spot on! Mixed with kurogane's hauntingly delivered thoughts on being stranded on a whole different planet, not knowing if he'll ever return? Truly hitting the space vibes - and v fitting for tsubasa's themes!
The wolfing out vs vampiring out fight? Belly rubs ? Offering blood ? Hell yeah
If I wrote everything I liked about the fic, I could just copy it because it's perfect, but let it be said that it kept me company through a stressful, all too hot day:D
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Wow, what a story! Kudos for having both a vampire and werewolf in the fic. I found Sakura a little off and I don't think I understood what was the metal "person" that she was putting together was, but I was really captivated by Fai and Kurogane. Great job!
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(Anonymous) 2019-09-28 07:51 am (UTC)(link)2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 10
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? 10
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 7
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The world building is great, but somehow in the end I wasn't that engaged into the story. I'm still trying to find out why exactly.
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