[Team Space] (Spy) Call Me Friend But Keep Me Closer

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Title: Call Me Friend But Keep Me Closer
Prompt: Spy
Rating: E
Tags: Space AU, Canon-Typical Violence, Threat of Violence, NSFN, Dub-Con, Major Character Death, Political Prisoner, Check author's note for more specifics please

A/N: Part one of two. Hopefully will be finished by the end of the weekend. 

There is a song, millennia old, that lilts gently through the universe. Not quite audible to the ear. Something that pulls at a place much deeper. A melody that starts in the brainstem and winds down the spine like luscious ivy. A harmony raised by a hundred thousand hands at any moment. A chorus that bleeds through the stars.

Call Me Friend But Keep Me Closer




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Comments

[atomherrerin]

Awesome job! Can't wait for chapter 2!

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7 (I can see where you are going with it, and I assume there's more in the next chapter?)
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[(Anonymous)]

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I tried to wait to see if you'll manage to finish this but alas...I really enjoyed the premise of the story and was looking forward to reading about Kurogane being the spy and having an agenda. I also enjoyed the budding relationship between Fai and Kurogane (but found Kurogane a little too nice and touchy with him at the very beginning).
Hope to read the completed fic someday!

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[(Anonymous)]

Forgot my handle lemazayahaza@tumblr

[(Anonymous)]

1. How in-character was this fic? 6
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 10
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? 8 - I guess? If you would continue
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 6
5. Was the my fic tagged correctly Yes


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[sciencemyfiction]

1. How in-character was this fic? (10)
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (7)
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? (10)
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (9)
5. Was the my fic tagged correctly (Yes so far!)

Great start to this fic, and I really liked the unusually brutal divide between the characters' backgrounds. It makes for an interesting (if PAINFULLY BLEAK) take on a potential future for space traveling humanity. The tension is palpable, I hope you eventually have the opportunity to come back and finish this one!

[tsubasafan]

1. How in-character was this fic? (9)
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (7) since we don’t have the other chapter, I can only guess what will happen, but I think you’ve built up to some good possibilities
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? (10)
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (9)
5. Was the my fic tagged correctly (Yes)

God what a cliffhanger, it definitely left me wanting more!