[Team Space] (Royalty) What Happens in Risa

[altalemur]

Title: What Happens in Risa
Prompt: Royalty(Trope)
Rating: Teen
Tags: street brawl, Kyle's there, politics
Andorrians have 4 genders: zhen, shen, chan, and thaan. Here, Fai is referred to with they/them pronouns.



https://archiveofourown.org/works/20396980



~the end.


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Your Fai was such an adorable little shit and your Kurogane was unintentionally (by him) hilarious! Little things such as Fai's alien background influencing how he mutilated Kurogane's name really helped cement that this was a space setting for me. Really enjoyable read~

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[crystalrequiem]

1. How in-character was this fic? (9)
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (9)
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4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (8)
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Yo! So glad to see your idea worked out. A very fun fic. The thread of humor rings strong and you have a great handle on Fai's annoying side.

I did want a little more time with this universe and to flesh things out a little more, but as a Pitch hitter, i know you were super rushed for time.

Great work!

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[tsubasafan]

1. How in-character was this fic? 9

2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 6 You had the royalty, but not a lot of groundwork. I’d like to have seen maybe kurogane reading a paper about what was happening on Fais planet, or hints at Fais royalty before the reveal or delving deeper into it.

3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? 7.5 I wish we’d had more background info, I wasn’t sure if this was based off anything until I read Klingon. I like the setting of a vacation planet but it was starting to feel more sea themed. It was reminding me of like outlaw star and cowboy bebop a little with the setting and I wanted more of that.

4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 8.5 it was very cute and I wish there was more!
5. Was the my fic tagged correctly yes

[sciencemyfiction]

1. How in-character was this fic? (9)
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4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (9)
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I was happy to see some star trek inspired entries on Team Space! I liked the setting-appropriate switcheroo at the end where Tomoyo and Sakura provide an out for Fai that doesn't require violence, allowing Kurogane to only ever act in self-defense. Clever!