zelinxia: (Nihon - KuroFai)
Xia ([personal profile] zelinxia) wrote in [community profile] kurofai 2012-04-30 04:02 am (UTC)

The flashbacks were surprisingly easy to write. I stuck in the last one to honor the wonderful and sweet and very strong boy Youou was - before his innocence was taken as he grows older. ;____; I planned out the sap for a while. Actually, I used the balcony scene from that "1 sentence" - just cause I'm a cheesy romantic like that. And Fai would anyways...

Of course Kurogane would come to find Kuro-sama as the most heartfelt endearment. If you put that scene in Nihon in an ordinary romance novel plot, I'd imagine the exchange and thought would be like this:

Fai: "Because I forgive you, and because I was so scared of losing you for the sake of my life and happiness, I don't want to be mad anymore at you. Kuro-sama...

Kurogane: *thinks, That name!!!*

Fai: I - I love you, Kuro-sama.

And therefore, Kurogane associates that name with the moment Fai comes back to him, and enjoys it, hooray!

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