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Drop by Drop (1/4)

Title: Drop by Drop
Prompt: Here Be Dragons
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: language
Please see the bottom for any notes as they will have spoilers.
Fai had found it a good opportunity to investigate
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(Anonymous) 2013-04-07 08:00 pm (UTC)(link)I think they are in-character , just missed some interaction between themselves ^^ but was really good =D
2 - How well did this fit the prompt? 10
I really like it, when i saw the prompt : Here be dragons, i assumed on this fic would be a "pure dragon thing", but it wasn't and you surprised me xD , i think it was very original ^^
3 - How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 8
as i said before , i think it was very original and i really like it , the reading kept me entertained ^^
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To tell you the truth, I didn't felt them in character, at least not really. I can agree with the anonymous reviewer above, maybe if they had some more conversation...
2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? (9)
Your idea was really good, I was pleasantly surprised with it. :)
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (6)
It was a bit slow paced here and there but it felt like you are rushing to the end too. You had an awesome idea, but somehow it didn't kick in, at least for me.