THIS IS SERIOUSLY BRILLIANT! I suspected there was time travel involved from the moment the egg-capsule-thing showed up, and that Fai was part of it -- but I had no idea who was traveling in which direction, or why. I never dreamed it would be both Fai AND Fei Wong Reed... and FWR actually not being (quite) as big of a masterminding douchebag this time around was a great twist. He was so detatched, like a true future time-traveler -- he doesn't give a fuck about this world or anything that happens to it, he just casually messes around with the timeline on his way through to the past.

This ending was great, Kurogane and Yuui get to meet and start over :D Kurogane will always miss the Fai that he knew, but he's not fully gone. And Syaoran really needs to meet with Sakura, if only so that he can stop being so obsessive.

This world you've built, the world of Clow, just feels so real, so intense and so simmeringly hot... it really does feel like a powderkeg on the edge of blowing up. Especially with those brief glimpses into the future and the past of this timeline -- and how different and better they were (or, in the case of Yuui's future, much worse.) All three are in the future of our own world, of course, so much so that the cycle of technology has risen and fallen and risen again.

Brilliant, BRILLIANT fic! :D