I just - I just can't. ;___; Okay, I just have to pick the pieces up and judge, right?
1. How in-character was this fic? 10 The thing I love about AUs is imagining how the characters would react differently in different settings. Their pasts and their motives shaped them, and yet the dialogue and actions could very well be canon.
2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? 9 I definitely see how this fic was inspired by the prompt.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 9 Half part enthralled - half part distracted in the beginning. Once the time machine (Egg) was excavated, I pretty much was sold. And then I was crushed by the cruel twist of events. Me: It's a time machine isn't it? Me: Please let it be a time machine! Me: Come on time travel. Me: It definitely is a time machine XP Me: Whoo! Time Machine! Me: Fai is a timetraveler... and everything hurts. ;__;
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1. How in-character was this fic? 10
The thing I love about AUs is imagining how the characters would react differently in different settings. Their pasts and their motives shaped them, and yet the dialogue and actions could very well be canon.
2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? 9
I definitely see how this fic was inspired by the prompt.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 9
Half part enthralled - half part distracted in the beginning. Once the time machine (Egg) was excavated, I pretty much was sold. And then I was crushed by the cruel twist of events.
Me: It's a time machine isn't it?
Me: Please let it be a time machine!
Me: Come on time travel.
Me: It definitely is a time machine XP
Me: Whoo! Time Machine!
Me: Fai is a timetraveler... and everything hurts. ;__;