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farenmaddox ([personal profile] farenmaddox) wrote in [community profile] kurofai 2013-06-13 02:48 am (UTC)

Re: Kintsugi, 2/2

So. Um. Do marriage proposals freak you out? Because MARRY ME YOU INCREDIBLE PERSON.

This is everything I was struggling to make sense of, and told so beautifully. I was amazed at the way you began it so lightheartedly, as though it was nothing more than an extra Tsubasa chapter full of shenanigans, and then slowly wove in the emotional elements and so carefully crafted it into such a personal story for Fai and Kurogane. This is just astonishingly lovely prose, and you said everything I was trying to think of. It's really, really perfect.

OF ALL THINGS THOUGH I feel like my favourite thing was the mention that sometimes Syaoran wakes up in tears because WOW thanks for unexpectedly SHATTERING MY HEART? Tsubasa bby. ;A;

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