1. Well rounded characterization is always something I pay great attention to. It's fun to play with their personalities in new worlds and scenarios, and I'm delighted they worked well in this psychic universe. In regards to my other works, thank you!
2. I definitely agree there were moments that could have been shown, versus being told - especially Fai's background, because the story is strictly (barring Yuuka-ku's history) from Kurogane's POV. Thank you for being honest with your impressions! When I redo and polish segments for the future, I'll keep this in mind. :D
3. It was certainly not my intentions to make the length intimidating. I honestly was aiming for no more than 20K originally, can you believe that? Though all in all, it worked out well, and I'm also pleased with the world building, so to hear the same from you makes me happy.
And thank YOU for taking the time to tackle my fic and scoring, along with everyone else's entries. We cannot say it enough how much we appreciate you scoring. Your part is super important to the fun annual event!!
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2. I definitely agree there were moments that could have been shown, versus being told - especially Fai's background, because the story is strictly (barring Yuuka-ku's history) from Kurogane's POV. Thank you for being honest with your impressions! When I redo and polish segments for the future, I'll keep this in mind. :D
3. It was certainly not my intentions to make the length intimidating. I honestly was aiming for no more than 20K originally, can you believe that? Though all in all, it worked out well, and I'm also pleased with the world building, so to hear the same from you makes me happy.
And thank YOU for taking the time to tackle my fic and scoring, along with everyone else's entries. We cannot say it enough how much we appreciate you scoring. Your part is super important to the fun annual event!!