I was wary when I saw that you decided to do a crossover with the Zelda universe but you did a stunning job. It fit perfectly! And on multiple fronts too when you include Clow and Yuuko. It was very clever!
How well written was the fic? 9.8
The story was written wonderfully. It flowed smoothly and progressed well. Your descriptions of the worlds were stunning and really captured their beauty. You also did well with showing how the feelings between Fai and Kurogane developed. On the down side, I felt the addition of throwing in Kyle and his attempted takeover to be a bit forced. It almost felt like it didn’t quite fit with the rest of the story. Though considering it is the Zelda universe, I suppose there has to be some crazy evil person set on destroying the peace and balance of the world.
How much did I enjoy this fic overall? 10
As a fan of Zelda, I feel I am a tad biased when I exclaim how awesome your story is. I’m willing to bet that may have been part of your plan to try and get high scores. ;) I was enthralled from start to finish. The worlds you chose to set the characters in, how your story unfolded, and your beautiful writing style made the story a wonderful piece of work.
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I was wary when I saw that you decided to do a crossover with the Zelda universe but you did a stunning job. It fit perfectly! And on multiple fronts too when you include Clow and Yuuko. It was very clever!
How well written was the fic? 9.8
The story was written wonderfully. It flowed smoothly and progressed well. Your descriptions of the worlds were stunning and really captured their beauty. You also did well with showing how the feelings between Fai and Kurogane developed. On the down side, I felt the addition of throwing in Kyle and his attempted takeover to be a bit forced. It almost felt like it didn’t quite fit with the rest of the story. Though considering it is the Zelda universe, I suppose there has to be some crazy evil person set on destroying the peace and balance of the world.
How much did I enjoy this fic overall? 10
As a fan of Zelda, I feel I am a tad biased when I exclaim how awesome your story is. I’m willing to bet that may have been part of your plan to try and get high scores. ;) I was enthralled from start to finish. The worlds you chose to set the characters in, how your story unfolded, and your beautiful writing style made the story a wonderful piece of work.