A classic example of a SciFi interspecies, though Kurogane is only a different species in half of this.
How well written was the fic? (8.5)
Well written, despite it being in 2nd person. There were a few mistakes here and there, but nothing overly distracting. The pacing wasn't bad either.
How much did I enjoy this fic overall? (7)
This fic was very heavy, with with the flashbacks being the only relief. It felt a lot like Infinity in that way - actually, I suppose they're kind of the same. It being unfinished also certainly puts a damper on things.
Still, the tension is fun to read, and the flashback was terribly cute. Overall, it was interesting enough, despite having very little knowledge of Chobits and Angelic Layer.
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How well did this fic fit the prompt? - (9)
A classic example of a SciFi interspecies, though Kurogane is only a different species in half of this.
How well written was the fic? (8.5)
Well written, despite it being in 2nd person. There were a few mistakes here and there, but nothing overly distracting. The pacing wasn't bad either.
How much did I enjoy this fic overall? (7)
This fic was very heavy, with with the flashbacks being the only relief. It felt a lot like Infinity in that way - actually, I suppose they're kind of the same. It being unfinished also certainly puts a damper on things.
Still, the tension is fun to read, and the flashback was terribly cute. Overall, it was interesting enough, despite having very little knowledge of Chobits and Angelic Layer.