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Nouvelle Dalleves ([personal profile] nouvellee) wrote in [community profile] kurofai 2015-07-07 04:29 am (UTC)

1. How well did this fic fit the prompt? 9
Painfully fitting. Love between a robot and a human is always so angsty, and then you go and make Kurogane human before ; w ;

2. How well written was the fic? 8
There were some mistakes that can be fix quickly. I liked your choice of using 2nd person, I think it fits the story really well and it conveys the sense of detachment from Kurogane.

3. How much did I enjoy this fic overall? 8
This was short but it was effectively painful and emotional. I want more, I want to suffer.

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