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silverservererror ([personal profile] silverservererror) wrote in [community profile] kurofai2016-08-05 10:44 pm

[Team Light] (Not the Droids You're Looking For) Blue Steel


Title: Blue Steel
Prompt: These are not the droids you're looking for
Rating: Mature
Warnings: brief, mild gore; some swears; Seishiro is a creepy dude; the do is implicitly done
Author's Notes: Whoever can catch the most references gets to be the biggest nerd. <3

Blue Steel


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1. How in-character was this fic? (1-10)
7 - They felt a bit off, Syaoran especially. Seishirou was surprising (can't say if in a good way or in a bad way, but it's Seishirou)
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (1-10)
9 - Aside from the literal inclusion of the prompt in the dialogue, I found the subtler instances the prompt showed through to be quite clever!
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (1-10)
9 - While the off-characterization through me off at the start, it was a wild ride through and through!