[Team Light] (Not the Droids You're Looking For) Blue Steel

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Title: Blue Steel
Prompt: These are not the droids you're looking for
Rating: Mature
Warnings: brief, mild gore; some swears; Seishiro is a creepy dude; the do is implicitly done
Author's Notes: Whoever can catch the most references gets to be the biggest nerd. <3

Blue Steel


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[farenmaddox]

We're still a little sparse on votes, so I hope it is okay with all the writers to have a moderator jumping in to vote as well!

1. How in-character was this fic? (9)

For a humour piece, this was very well-done. The dialogue between Kurogane and Fai was great.

2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (10)

I was really thrilled to see a humour entry, and this story filled the prompt excellently. Could not have asked for a more fun and engaging interpretation.

3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (7)

While there was a lot to like (I laughed out loud in several places, especially when Fai first got himself... stuck) there was a lot that didn't seem to fit quite correctly. I didn't understand Seishirou's role, and could not get at all where you were going with that scene that included Doumeki and Seishirou. This fic would have been better for leaving that bit completely out if possible. I also didn't really know how the introduction of Sakura, Touya, and Yukito was supposed to be part of the story. I would have liked to see you devote that energy to making the most out of the 3 main characters.

But the main story of Kurogane and Fai and Blue Steel was a fantastic and weird one, and I got a huge kick out of it!