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xchan ([personal profile] xchan) wrote in [community profile] kurofai 2016-08-16 09:17 am (UTC)

I really love the setting! I'd like if it were explained a little more, but you gave enough for it to work and have me thinking :D I love that you included those CCS bits, like Meiling, Kero and Yue. If I have to nitpick, I would say that even if I liked the detail of the laser sword, it felt a little like it came out of nowhere.

1. How in-character was this fic? 9
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 10
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 10

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