1. How in-character was this fic? 9 2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 10 3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 9
I loved reading this fic, even if my only aproach to naval stories has been Pirates of the caribbean xD Kurogane and Fai were spot-on and I loved that you included XiaoSaku <3 Only two things: the ending felt a bit rushed with the Sea King leaving too easily, and Touya. He usually is a pain in the ass but leading a mob doesn't seem like him.
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2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 10
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 9
I loved reading this fic, even if my only aproach to naval stories has been Pirates of the caribbean xD Kurogane and Fai were spot-on and I loved that you included XiaoSaku <3
Only two things: the ending felt a bit rushed with the Sea King leaving too easily, and Touya. He usually is a pain in the ass but leading a mob doesn't seem like him.