[Team Dark] (the Eleventh Hour) Under Lock and Stone

[cloverfield]

Title: Under Lock and Stone
Prompt: The Eleventh Hour
Rating: M
Warnings: This fic contains strong violence, adult language, minor character death and dark themes. This fic may be triggering due to scenes that contain: claustrophobic implications, references to war, imprisonment, prisoners of war, execution, situational despair, and graphic injury. Please do not read this fic if you believe you may be triggered by any of the above; otherwise I am happy to discuss any themes before you read if you wish.

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Comments

[notpotable]

1. How in-character was this fic?

10! Very nicely done~

2. How well did this fic handle the prompt?

10 again! Like the tolling of a dreadful bell, you never let the reader forget the prompt and you made it so hopeless and threatening. Hella Team Dark too, so well-executed.

3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall?

8 - Gosh it was bleak and hopeless, I was fearful and anxious reading it even though it was such a quality fic. I'm sorry! ;_;

[cloverfield]

Oh gosh, thank you! I'm sorry you found it stressful and anxiety-inducing, but I'm glad (?) you thought it worked for the prompt. I know it wasn't the most fun fic to read, believe me - I was drained after finishing it - so I'm thankful you stuck with it even though it was hard. I think the next thing I'm going to write will be something silly and light-hearted, for my own sake if nothing else ^^;;

Thank you so much for reading and voting - I really appreciate it!

[notpotable]

Writing it must have been such an ordeal. Thank you for doing it!