haezofdaust ([personal profile] haezofdaust) wrote in [community profile] kurofai 2016-09-01 04:52 pm (UTC)

1. How in-character was this fic? (1-10)
9

2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (1-10)
8

3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (1-10)
9

So I did enjoy this fic very much! Perhaps some parts were a bit clunky and didn’t flow or progress as naturally, and I do feel maybe this piece could have been much more if given a longer length, but there’s a certain rawness to this piece that really brought out their struggles - it was a lovely read!

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