1. How in-character was this fic? 9 I felt that you did a really god job of keeping Fai and Kurogane in character. Even Fai’s actions in the story are comparable to what he did in the manga.
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 9 It was much different than what I was expecting but I enjoyed the twist.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 8.5 I enjoyed the story but felt that it was lacking in some aspects. Mainly, I think the interactions between Fai and Kurogane could have been embellished on a bit more. I felt that the relationship between the two was too quick in developing over the course of the three meetings (despite it technically happening over time). I was also a bit confused with the ending. I’m not sure how Kurogane is supposed to restore the life in the area (or if he even knows how). Even so, I really did enjoy the story. Thank you so much for writing it!
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I felt that you did a really god job of keeping Fai and Kurogane in character. Even Fai’s actions in the story are comparable to what he did in the manga.
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 9
It was much different than what I was expecting but I enjoyed the twist.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 8.5
I enjoyed the story but felt that it was lacking in some aspects. Mainly, I think the interactions between Fai and Kurogane could have been embellished on a bit more. I felt that the relationship between the two was too quick in developing over the course of the three meetings (despite it technically happening over time). I was also a bit confused with the ending. I’m not sure how Kurogane is supposed to restore the life in the area (or if he even knows how). Even so, I really did enjoy the story. Thank you so much for writing it!