[TEAM DARK] (Fantastic Beasts) Beacons

[thecicada]

Title: Beacons
Prompt: Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them
Rating: T
Warnings: Major character death/death as a major theme; Suggestions of animal abuse

More author's notes inside, but thank you to everyone who has made this event possible by organising, participating, or scoring! It's awesome to see the Olympics living on. Thank you to my coach the-smallest-kurapika for all your help! GOOD JOB GUYS let's read some fic.

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Comments

[miyakodea]

1. How in-character was this fic? 9
I felt that you did a really god job of keeping Fai and Kurogane in character. Even Fai’s actions in the story are comparable to what he did in the manga.

2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 9
It was much different than what I was expecting but I enjoyed the twist.

3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 8.5
I enjoyed the story but felt that it was lacking in some aspects. Mainly, I think the interactions between Fai and Kurogane could have been embellished on a bit more. I felt that the relationship between the two was too quick in developing over the course of the three meetings (despite it technically happening over time). I was also a bit confused with the ending. I’m not sure how Kurogane is supposed to restore the life in the area (or if he even knows how). Even so, I really did enjoy the story. Thank you so much for writing it!