1. How in-character was this fic? 10 You did a fantastic job keeping everyone in character. Even the supporting cast seemed perfect. What’s even more impressive is that all the characters seemed to have a depth to them that is pretty rare in many stories.
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 9.5 I felt that you did a really good job filling the prompt. I love the world you created. However, it felt almost like the magical creatures were just there in the world you created but were not the real focus of the story.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 9.5 I really enjoyed the story. You did a wonderful job creating the world, made the characters feel very real, and wrote the story beautifully. It would be interesting to see what other adventures the characters could go on. As a mythology geek, I also have to give you cookies for including links to additional information regarding the content of your story.
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You did a fantastic job keeping everyone in character. Even the supporting cast seemed perfect. What’s even more impressive is that all the characters seemed to have a depth to them that is pretty rare in many stories.
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 9.5
I felt that you did a really good job filling the prompt. I love the world you created. However, it felt almost like the magical creatures were just there in the world you created but were not the real focus of the story.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 9.5
I really enjoyed the story. You did a wonderful job creating the world, made the characters feel very real, and wrote the story beautifully. It would be interesting to see what other adventures the characters could go on. As a mythology geek, I also have to give you cookies for including links to additional information regarding the content of your story.