[Team Future] (Vengeance is a dish best served cold) These skies are breaking

[reikah]

Title: These skies are breaking
Prompt: Vengeance is a dish best served cold
Rating: R
Warnings: Some drug (mis)use, abuse of power and authority, author has no idea what she's doing
Any author's notes Let's have another apocalypse now with 66% more robots because hahaha what is this story i dont even???

[Prologue] [Part One] [Part Two] [Part Three]

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Comments

[renlylittlerose]

Hmmm... Again, I'm not sure I should post this here? (Xia, I'm sorry I've quoted you so many times in my comments, I guess we just have similiar opinions? posted it in part 3, but this is the community site and it's where the rating thingy is, so I figured it made more sense to be here? Or maybe not? Sorry xD)

And I've reached the end of the Olympic fics. That was a long journey, and a very pleasent one! I'm amazed at everyone's creativity. They all made such wonderful stories! And you Reikah, organizing everything. Thanks for all the fun!

(review has spoilers)

1. How in-character was this fic? 10
It was pretty spot-on. I loved Kurogane, how he's such a good man even after all the bad stuff that happened. Fai and Yuui were so violent so, full of hatred, but that's to be expected in this kind of world. The crossovers were amazing, HOKUTO!! And Fuuma being an idiot, as usual. Oh, Yuuko too! She was awesome! I just loved what you did with her here.

2. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? 9
It had a lot of revenge. At first I thought this would only be about Kurogane, but that the end there were conspiracies and all that stuff. Quite a full story!

3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 9
I really liked it. The universe you created and all that, you can always create such interesting stuff! There was a lot of pain (I remember your last Olympic fic had a lot of pain too ;_; why the pain?), a lot of grief, but at the end there was hope of something better. This kind of idea has been used, but you managed to bring something fresh to it, with the machines and the taminants. It only took me some time to understand all the stuff, specially regarding the machines and the virus. But it was really nice! :D Looking forward to the epilogue!

Oh dear, I'm gonna miss reading new fic all day! xD Everyone should just get a round of aplauses for their awesome work!