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phebe ([personal profile] phebe) wrote in [community profile] kurofai 2015-06-17 03:20 pm (UTC)

1. How well did this fic fit the prompt? 8.5/10
I didn't expect this kind of use for the prompt, and I liked it! through is not a full 10/10, because, even if the whole story is based on the Soulmate project, and It's Fay's project life, I missed the feeling of "soulmate" in the simplest (or romantic) form. (The connection between Kurogane and Fay as soulmate was missing.)

2. How well written was the fic? 9/10
It was very well written! It's fluid and I was stick against the monitor all the time, great narrative rhythm, and every scene was enjoyable!

3. How much did I enjoy this fic overall? 9/10
I enjoyed it very much, and I liked the canon parallels! ^w^

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