(Team Sci Fi) [Soulmate] The Soulmate Project

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The Soulmate Project:

Prompt: Soulmate

Summary: When Fai’s brother is killed, and he is dragged into the resistance movement Yuui had been a part of, his life as a programmer at InfoTech is shattered. Now hidden away in a safe house with one companion, a surly ex-medical student named Kurogane, Fai has to decide to help his former company, run by the only family he has left, or these new rebels.

Rated: T

Warnings: Brief surgery scene:

Notes: I got the idea for this from reading an article about the Apple Watch, combined with the words 'artificial soulmates' from my roommate Rémy (username-goes-here most places) when I was beginning to plot. I also owe her much for beta-ing, and telling me when things didn't make sense (as happened a lot) and forever checking my spellling. Thank you darling! I'm VERY excited to be posting in this great community of fans, and also to be a part of this contest! Thank you!:

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1. How well did this fic fit the prompt? 8.5/10
I didn't expect this kind of use for the prompt, and I liked it! through is not a full 10/10, because, even if the whole story is based on the Soulmate project, and It's Fay's project life, I missed the feeling of "soulmate" in the simplest (or romantic) form. (The connection between Kurogane and Fay as soulmate was missing.)

2. How well written was the fic? 9/10
It was very well written! It's fluid and I was stick against the monitor all the time, great narrative rhythm, and every scene was enjoyable!

3. How much did I enjoy this fic overall? 9/10
I enjoyed it very much, and I liked the canon parallels! ^w^