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arisprite ([personal profile] arisprite) wrote in [community profile] kurofai2015-06-15 08:52 pm

(Team Sci Fi) [Soulmate] The Soulmate Project

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The Soulmate Project:

Prompt: Soulmate

Summary: When Fai’s brother is killed, and he is dragged into the resistance movement Yuui had been a part of, his life as a programmer at InfoTech is shattered. Now hidden away in a safe house with one companion, a surly ex-medical student named Kurogane, Fai has to decide to help his former company, run by the only family he has left, or these new rebels.

Rated: T

Warnings: Brief surgery scene:

Notes: I got the idea for this from reading an article about the Apple Watch, combined with the words 'artificial soulmates' from my roommate Rémy (username-goes-here most places) when I was beginning to plot. I also owe her much for beta-ing, and telling me when things didn't make sense (as happened a lot) and forever checking my spellling. Thank you darling! I'm VERY excited to be posting in this great community of fans, and also to be a part of this contest! Thank you!:

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[personal profile] kittenintheskyy 2015-06-16 11:41 pm (UTC)(link)
1)How well did this fic fit the prompt? 9/10
Well! Your fic fit the prompt incredibly well, and the take on the prompt was so innovative and different. It was really refreshing!

How well written was the fic? 9/10
This was very well written, no noticable mistakes and a well thought out plot and form.

How much did I enjoy this fic overall? 9/10
I loved this! From the plot down to the tiny details I was hooked!

27/30