(Team Sci Fi) [Cafe] Flip the Tables

[aythli]

Title: Flip the Tables
Prompt: [Cafe]
Rating: T
Warnings: None
Summary: Fai never expected to find himself playing a café-themed, rom-com game as part of his job. He never expected to find a sword-wielding character in that type of game either, but this was apparently a day for surprises.
Notes: Even though this is a last-minute sub for the café theme, I had a great deal of fun writing it. Massive thanks to Cloverfield for beta-ing.

( Flip the Tables )

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Comments

[senecanya]

1. How well did this fic fit the prompt?
10/10

Very well, and uniquely so! I loved the sci-fi twist with virtual gaming and making the cafe the platform! So cool.


2. How well written was the fic?
10/10

I thought it was all great! The characters stayed in character; no grammatical errors that I noticed while reading; the story flowed and made sense throughout. All good.

3. How much did I enjoy this fic overall?
9/10

A good bit! I was daydreaming up so many fun scenarios for the end of that fic XD

[aythli]

Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear the characters stayed in character. It's been a while since I've written these guys, so I was really worried about it. :D